My god you're back on NG :O
The dancing elephants are truly wonderful.

This is (sh)art.

Yell it from the rooftops. Fuck Adobe.

(sh)art

This is honestly pretty good, I just feel like it needs a better master. There's a lot of space for you to push loudness here without losing any clarity, so maybe compress, saturate and limit (in that order) your master channel a bit more :]

Composition arrangement and sound design are all cool, it just needs a good mix/master. Try messing around with limiting/compression to maximize loudness, since you have a lot of space to work with here.

Phenomenal